203 words - Tweaking a Homeless Scene

I have a folder entitled "Scenes without a Home."  A while back I wrote about 600 words that described how the whole science-fiction aspect of this book works, and it was pretty good.  I wanted to add a couple of points to it to make it even more intriguing.  I wrote these 200 words in 20 minutes, which is about the best I could have hoped for. 

Taking the babies to a concert at our JCC this afternoon...hopefully get more in tonight.

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Words written today: 203 

Total words as of today: 20,618

Listening to: "Till Kingdom Come" by Coldplay (yes, again.)

Obsessed with: Sweet Gherkin Pickles